tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post1263975561493431643..comments2023-10-19T08:12:43.536-07:00Comments on White Noise or Silent Thoughts.....: Lost Cause??Prabhu Dutta Dashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07210679026175139285noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-60751025658317877522009-02-18T21:50:00.000-08:002009-02-18T21:50:00.000-08:00its made me fall in love with tears all the more n...its made me fall in love with tears all the more now...!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-38588674558432648142009-02-12T11:12:00.000-08:002009-02-12T11:12:00.000-08:00Finally, got here :)I like the way things linked u...Finally, got here :)<BR/><BR/>I like the way things linked up in the ending... and each one each part of the narrative finding a whole in itself. The little observations and the articulation of it all is so beautifully done :)<BR/><BR/>Keep going, Prabhu, am enjoying your writing :)Usha Pisharodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08569968324374522544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-79452530510088127792009-02-05T17:35:00.000-08:002009-02-05T17:35:00.000-08:00just one sentence brought tears to my eyes i dnt k...just one sentence brought tears to my eyes i dnt knw why ....but as u said wen u think abt the gud times it brings tears and reading this brought bak memories from the past family--mom dad my sisters specially and hostel...Baishalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08544464039502661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-28700737340922599122009-02-04T09:48:00.000-08:002009-02-04T09:48:00.000-08:00You have a thing for Alas!?Also, having two sister...You have a thing for Alas!?<BR/>Also, having two sisters, I have seen my share of such farewells already.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-52887547839467683952009-02-04T06:09:00.000-08:002009-02-04T06:09:00.000-08:00@PiperGlad that you could come in here :) Shall ta...@Piper<BR/>Glad that you could come in here :) Shall take care of punctuations and grammar from hence forth :)<BR/><BR/>Consider this as a quick impulsive post :|Prabhu Dutta Dashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07210679026175139285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-38255276129186122692009-02-04T02:50:00.000-08:002009-02-04T02:50:00.000-08:00"The tears are a way of cleansing our eyes as we a..."The tears are a way of cleansing our eyes as we adjust them to focus on life again".....this was one good line, among many others in this post.<BR/><BR/>The ending is what made the piece special for me. And yes, please take care of punctuation and sentence construction. That doesn't take too much time or effort and it's kind-er towards the reader.Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083454333494549203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-5212972663460396562009-02-03T22:25:00.000-08:002009-02-03T22:25:00.000-08:00@RozzHomecoming are always happy? Aren't they? I w...@Rozz<BR/><BR/>Homecoming are always happy? Aren't they? I wrote this at a pace which surprised me and didn't gave a read back :) I guess I know what you refer at Mr. Critic :P<BR/><BR/>@Sashu nd Phoenix<BR/><BR/>Thanks :)Prabhu Dutta Dashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07210679026175139285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-1601110884140618902009-02-03T17:18:00.000-08:002009-02-03T17:18:00.000-08:00aah nice post.. i guess this was the happy homecom...aah nice post.. i guess this was the happy homecoming u had referred to?<BR/>liked the ending particularly... :)<BR/><BR/>but, and tak it as +ve criticism, some of ur sentences don't make sense.. the grammar and structure r all skewed.. <BR/>otherwise nice post!Random Guyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10300920768232142049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-35720862372850530642009-02-03T04:29:00.000-08:002009-02-03T04:29:00.000-08:00Lovely post...! extremely well written..takes one ...Lovely post...! extremely well written..takes one along like a tide :) good one prabhu!Sashu...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06671059585413076187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-43907988511780772602009-02-03T00:41:00.000-08:002009-02-03T00:41:00.000-08:00Quite an apt title for the post.. :) The conclusio...Quite an apt title for the post.. :) <BR/>The conclusion a perfect ending to a perfect memory.. <BR/><BR/>Cheers,<BR/>The PhoenixAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com