tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post4289607044745913694..comments2023-10-19T08:12:43.536-07:00Comments on White Noise or Silent Thoughts.....: Lost Innocence!Prabhu Dutta Dashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07210679026175139285noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-90770771850990087462009-05-17T08:10:00.000-07:002009-05-17T08:10:00.000-07:00There's nothing more frightening than the prospect...There's nothing more frightening than the prospect of losing your present only to acknowledge moments later that it is now no more than just your past.<br />Very well written...<br />And oh yes, I love the photograph thatyou've posted :)<br />Do keep writing...NUTS 'n' ASHEShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15085723853603286392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-58784241304119596122009-04-03T09:04:00.000-07:002009-04-03T09:04:00.000-07:00the protagonist here is indeed a part f everyone.....the protagonist here is indeed a part f everyone..could relate to it very well indeed... very well written! i muz say that! the ideas seems powerful n influential too!<BR/><BR/>n yea, am glad to hv such punishments!! :PSashu...https://www.blogger.com/profile/06671059585413076187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-22270101124212756602008-11-25T23:11:00.000-08:002008-11-25T23:11:00.000-08:00Interesting.. Uncertainties have a way of eating y...Interesting.. Uncertainties have a way of eating you up.. And you have captured it very well.. :)<BR/><BR/>Banter has been updated, still functional and running! :PAninditahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00150173859381860919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-49194417799021322522008-11-24T05:52:00.000-08:002008-11-24T05:52:00.000-08:00I so identify myself with the protagonist.. :) I s...I so identify myself with the protagonist.. :) I suppose most of us do as I see from all the comments here.. :) Just to be stupid.. comically so.. :) <BR/><BR/>Cheers,<BR/>MeMoonstruck Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13618734122238980500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-45913582814503718542008-11-15T16:53:00.000-08:002008-11-15T16:53:00.000-08:00Very nicely written Prabhu. You come out as an ang...Very nicely written Prabhu. You come out as an angry young man :), and I thought that was the '70s theme :D.<BR/><BR/>A little suggestion - buoy is a floating device, you can never be buoyed down with weight. it can be "burdened down," "bowed down," "bogged down," etc. (That is just the English teacher in me. Hope you don't mind)Roopahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14737410198582065683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-19337300920682813802008-11-12T05:35:00.000-08:002008-11-12T05:35:00.000-08:00Too real and too true :)...Why is it that one year...Too real and too true :)...<BR/>Why is it that one yearns for things of past as they move past phases in life? And why is it that one goes back to childhood, to find a semblance of sanity amidst the chaos that surrounds us everyday? Is it that the change brought in by the age, has succeeded in stripping our smile? <BR/><BR/>Running through the life- a race between womb and tomb – expectations – ours and from the people we care about, emotions drive us for the better part of the race. But not knowing why we run the race, well, is sad! and I am very sure, we all go through that phase, not once, but many times, in our race through to our destiny.<BR/><BR/>Very well written :).Mahitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667985726983785656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-9774680257755162462008-11-12T04:26:00.000-08:002008-11-12T04:26:00.000-08:00scary. i see bits of me in this :(well written tho...scary. i see bits of me in this :(<BR/>well written though!PIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10851884616301741291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-28893706934614784862008-11-12T02:39:00.000-08:002008-11-12T02:39:00.000-08:00@CI am on a learning spree.. Thanks for the encour...@C<BR/><BR/>I am on a learning spree.. Thanks for the encouragement :) At least you came to read!Prabhu Dutta Dashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07210679026175139285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-57147793370785659232008-11-12T02:29:00.000-08:002008-11-12T02:29:00.000-08:00Interesting post.. somehow i find ur new style of ...Interesting post.. somehow i find ur new style of writing much better..<BR/><BR/>@ baishali..<BR/><BR/>" The weight of pretense, the weight of expectation, the weight of futility! He dragged because his partner thought he could, they thought he would and he thought he should."<BR/><BR/>same here..Random Guyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10300920768232142049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-90325818944218520322008-11-11T04:25:00.000-08:002008-11-11T04:25:00.000-08:00abhi tu real real sound krne laga he...ek dum itna...abhi tu real real sound krne laga he<BR/>...ek dum itna transition kesan hua? haaan?<BR/><BR/>aur han ye wala writeup humne "unko" bi padhaya.nw u knw who it is:pUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01940655499926764325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-26735338134543024562008-11-10T10:06:00.000-08:002008-11-10T10:06:00.000-08:00hmmm reading this the obvious does strike..the los...hmmm reading this the obvious does strike..the lost innocense-- each one of us is entangled in this web ...but personally while i was reading this blog, especially considering the scrap that i had just read and a not so well received chat by someone very close, I was glued to the sentence <BR/><BR/>" The weight of pretense, the weight of expectation, the weight of futility! He dragged because his partner thought he could, they thought he would and he thought he should."<BR/><BR/>I dnt knw why I drew an analogy to relationships....Baishalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08544464039502661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-24894862304174363582008-11-05T10:32:00.000-08:002008-11-05T10:32:00.000-08:00//there are no certainties there are only opportun...//there are no certainties there are only opportunities.//<BR/><BR/>nice nice...<BR/><BR/>i like the way you write man.<BR/>hugs<BR/>tcrainboyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13884782002088989668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-12045194473767826532008-11-05T07:56:00.000-08:002008-11-05T07:56:00.000-08:00@Usha:this indeed is the sorry state of affairs an...@Usha:<BR/>this indeed is the sorry state of affairs and we cant skip it.<BR/><BR/>@Piper<BR/>You know why the could would should thing came up. The 16th of Nov. would test this!I have decided to stick my the MSWord word help!Prabhu Dutta Dashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07210679026175139285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-42986312873168345362008-11-05T07:21:00.000-08:002008-11-05T07:21:00.000-08:00And one more thing. Armour has a 'u' in it.And one more thing. Armour has a 'u' in it.Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083454333494549203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-91223970314879961442008-11-05T07:16:00.000-08:002008-11-05T07:16:00.000-08:00Hmmm good post. Although the could would should th...Hmmm good post. Although the could would should thing almost cracked me up. <BR/><BR/>Nice photograph too.Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083454333494549203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34529667.post-37344699374208043272008-11-05T03:33:00.000-08:002008-11-05T03:33:00.000-08:00You know, this is rather frighteningly real.. and ...You know, this is rather frighteningly real.. and well captured: the angst, the anguish, the rather lost feeling!<BR/><BR/>Your language is very poetic too! Especially the final paragraph! Very evocative!!!Usha Pisharodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08569968324374522544noreply@blogger.com