Sunday, March 29, 2009

"THE" defeat in "A" win- A 55F

White washed ceiling or a colorful life canvas? He stared at the various hues of painted life. Knitting the final act together- positivity of hopes? Ballerina’s shift as ball kissed legs, pirouettes and tackles-Game vision delivered.



The loss in a win? The farewell (last) football match of my team!

Play together at Convocation again.
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A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:

* Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)
* A setting,
* One or more characters,
* Some conflict, and
* A resolution. (Not limited to moral of the story)

8 comments:

Rozz said...

u have at least 2 pending tags...
better do them soon!! :X

Marvin said...

i know one more quality that it must have (especially if it's by you).

you must read it 55 times in order to understand it in entirety.

Varun Raj said...

i understood nothing ... :cry:

Prabhu Dutta Das said...

Seems the experiment failed in entirety :(

Was trying to collage the sights of a Final Football Team get together. When a win is even a defeat. You no longer proud yourself in being the part of the team you grew up with :(

Hope the extended words helped :)

Sashu... said...

Interestin play wi words here! i cud get the gist f it pretty well :) and a different 55f frm all that i hv read in de blogosphere till now!! (hvnt read that many thou!! hehe)

Usha Pisharody said...

Woah! A footballers fifty five fiction, fair and fortuitous.. :D!

Guess most of it, from the ballerina's moves, and the tackles.

Next one at the convocation was neat, the close:)

pseudo intellectual said...

with the add-on comment, i understood :)

Anitha said...

:)

And why have you not blogged in over six weeks now? :)