Sunday, April 15, 2007

Zindagggiiiiii

Un raaho mein paaya maine apne aap ko

Chiraag bhi kam they jahan roshni ke liye

Lau mili thi dil ke deeye se

Phir bhi anjaan thi nigaahein sacchai se

Siskiyon ne nirjeev kiya marm se,

Zindagi nammin hui geele kaagaz mein

koi jalata bhi nahin koi bahata bhi nahin,

is qadar hain akele rahaon mein dil ki,

koi bulata bhi nahi koi batlata bhi nahin

Auron ne toh kya Rangon ne bhi bewaafai ka saath diya !!!!

6 comments:

alien said...

hmmmm.. nice try... surely better than ur english ones... nd dude aisa kya ho gaya?

Prabhu Dutta Das said...

Refer to the latest post!!!

chandni said...

somehow writing hindi in english kills the beauty of the language
i am the perfectly wrong person to comment on hindi poetry but i guess in any language poetry is music
nice nice

Prabhu Dutta Das said...

Ahhh.. Finally some appreciating heads!!!

@Jhansi Ki Rani
hindi font looks terrible !!

evilution said...

loved it. btw the title seems incomplete :)

Sashu... said...

i loved this! de feelings come across so beautifully :)